Goodbye, goodbye, good friends goodbye!

October 18th, 2009 by Timbo94

You may notice the reference in the title; it’s from “Bear in the Big Blue House”. http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Bear_in_the_big_blue_house

I haven’t really had anything to post lately, plus (and no offence intended to those of you outside this group) this blog was meant only for the regular visitors to Four Island (don’t bother joining it just for this, it won’t help!).

Since this site has no privacy (other than password protecting posts), I will be moving my stories and things to another site, possibly multiple sites. Who knows, you may find these stories again someday. Just remember, I’m not the only person in the world who uses the name “Timbo94″, and anyway, I’ll be using a different name. Soon this site will be gone… forever!

But to those of you like Starla, Drifty, etc. (you know who you are!), don’t worry (be happy), cause I will lead you to wherever I end up.

COMMENT TIME:

I have gotten some odd comments, so I will now talk about them for no reason! YAY!

First off, Arsento said that I write “very interesting articles”. ….Kay

Peter asked if I was a “professional journalist”. No, I made it quite clear in my first ever post and in the About Me section that I am a teenager! Who goes to school!

Other people have put all sorts of weird stuff in the comments. And yes, I know a lot of this (or all) is just spam, but I wanted to talk about it, so… * shrugs *.

Well then; so long, farewell, avita sai (I’m sure that’s spelt wrong, but oh well) goodbye! Goodbye!

Oh, uh… by the way, Starla… don’t destroy (OMG EXPLOSIONS) the site until I have given the OK, cause I need to get all my stories and stuff onto the computer first.

SEEK ‘Setting’

June 6th, 2009 by Timbo94

In Creative Writing SEEK (extension (I’m not really that smart ;))) class, I - yes, just me; the rest of the class (Sammi and Drifty (seriously, that’s our whole class!)) was away - had to write a ’setting’ piece of writing. The aim was to mainly write about one moment in time, and to be very descriptive. The result is below. My teacher said it was really good (YAY!), but that it was cliched (:().

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Virtual Bubble Wrap!

March 14th, 2009 by Timbo94

I don’t know why, but this is INCREDIBLY entertaining! Go to this site:

http://www.virtual-bubblewrap.com/popnow.shtml

If you want, you can tick the box labelled “Manic Mode”, and then you don’t have to click, just skide the mouse over the top.

All credit for finding this goes to my cousin. Damn you, you’ve gotten me addicted!!!!!!!!!!!

So Many Stories…

March 8th, 2009 by Timbo94

Yes, I have started yet another story. I have decided that since I keep getting writer’s block, I will write at least the first chapter of any new story idea I have, and then, if it works, I will hopefully write more chapters for it later.

Also, I realize that I now have two characters in seperate stories both named Max. I have a good reason. In “Puss” I based the character of Max on the cat who lives next door to me, who is named Max in real life. In “The Inside Story”, the character is named Max because (I think) that is the name I used for his character when this idea was originally thought up, as an imaginary game I played with a friend when I was little, where the character of Luke was actually named Luke in that game (I think).

Another thing: I know that I don’t have any female characters in my stories yet. But “yet” is the key word, as I do plan to have some.

The Inside Story: Chapter 1

March 8th, 2009 by Timbo94

“We won’t be gone long; a few hours max. You have our number if you need anything right?”

“Yes, I’ve got it. You two go and enjoy yourselves.”

“Bye Max dear.”

“Don’t rush home on my account.” The door closed behind the woman and her husband. “Because the longer you take the more money I get.”

Luke sat down on the couch, turning on the television. Max, the little boy Luke was babysitting, climbed up next to him and said “I’m not meant to watch TV.”

“Yeah, but I want to watch my shows. I’m not missing them just ’cause your parents are too over protective. And remember, if you tell them I’m doing this, then next time I babysit you I won’t let you stay up late reading… whatever it is you read.”

“I know that, you’ve already told me that many times. I’m not stupid.”

“Well, you are only, what, 3 years old?”

“I’m 4 years old, thankyou very much!”

Luke looked at Max quizzically. “Thankyou very much? You’re 4, why do you talk like that?”

“Dad says it’s because I read a lot of books.”

“You sure do. I don’t know anyone my age that reads as much as you, and I’m 16! Now, go and read a book; I want to watch my shows.”

“Okay.” Max waddled off to his room.

“Finally, some peace.” Luke watched his favourite people in the world battle bad guys and solve crimes.

“Hey Luuuuuuuke!” Max called from his room. “Come and look at this cool book!”

“No, Max, read it on your own! “Geez, what’s his problem? I don’t get how a bunch of words on a page could be as exciting as some of the awesome stuff they have on TV.” He sank down into the depths of the couch, covering himself with cushions. “Nothing is going to get me up, not for a long while.”

Luke was proved wrong seconds later however, as a flash of brilliant white light and a scream came from Max’s room. He jumped up and ran to the source of the scream, but all he found was an empty room. Max was nowhere to be found.

Puss: Chapter 1 - Puss & Max on Death Hill

February 13th, 2009 by Timbo94

A hand touches my head, waking me from my slumber. What?! Oh, it’s you. I was asleep y’know! Geez. The same hand slides down my back. Trying to make up for waking me? Well…ok.

“We’ve got to go now Puss, we’ll be home later.”

Yeah, whatever. As the front door closes I get up, stretch, and go to the box. Two minutes later - don’t judge me; I ate a lot yesterday - I eat some food, have a drink, and exit the house through the catdoor. Hmmm…where to? I could go to the forest, the kennel, the beach, or…I could go to death hill. Nah, that’s suicide. Although, I am a bit bored…

I jump the fence into the front yard, past the gate and onto death hill. I know I shouldn’t be here, but it’s the morning, and most people have left for work or school. Plus, the racers won’t be up until at least the afternoon, and even then they won’t be out of the house until about 10pm. I should be fine.

“Hey Puss, babies gone yet?”
I frown. “Don’t call them that Max, they take care of us.”
“Yeah, but when they talk to us they sound like babies,” says Max. He then puts on a silly voice and says “aw, my little pussy, you’re so cute!”
“Oh, shut up Max!”

“Ha, sorry,” says Max, grinning. “So, what are you doing out here? Usually when you come to talk to me, you stay in the dwelling garden - not always yours, but you know what I mean.”
“Yeah, well, I was bored, alright? And the racers won’t be up for hours anyway; it’s perfectly safe.”
“I s’pose. Well then, why don’t you come with me to the forest?”
“Huh? I just worked up the nerve to leave the dwelling, I’m not going back in already.”
“No, not that forest doofus, the real forest. Well, as close to a real forest as we have around here. Y’know, the one right next to the park?”
“Oh, right, sure. And if there’s no one at the park, we can go there too.”
“Sounds good. Let’s go.”

“Wait, first I need to visit the box again.”
“Again? When did you last go?”
“About 10 minutes ago.” On seeing Max’s face I say “hey, don’t give me that look; I had a lot to eat yesterday.”

Guardians & Demons Character Profile: Monk

February 12th, 2009 by Timbo94

Name: Monk

Age: ???

Background: ???

Origin of Name: “Monk” is short for Monkey.

Author’s Notes: Monk is wise, calm and serene. He doesn’t usually worry very much, as evidenced in the 3rd chapter when Troy appears on the outcrop. I know there isn’t much to this profile, but that’s mainly because not much has been revealed in the story yet.

Guardians & Demons Character Profile: Fred

February 11th, 2009 by Timbo94

*picture forthcoming*

Name: Fred

Age: 15

Guardian of: Friendship

Background: ???

Origin of Name: “Fred” is short for “Friendship”. Not very original I know, but the name has really grown on me, so I won’t be changing it.

Author’s Notes: Fred plays a very important part in this story. Thought it may not seem like it now, like Monk said, it’s a special power. Oh, and I have something planned for him down the track. It’s not to do with his powers – not really. It’s something that will give his character some more depth. What is it? Wait and see…

Guardians & Demons: Chapter 4 - A Powerful Friendship

February 10th, 2009 by Timbo94

“Man, I can’t wait for the races, can you?” asked Dylan excitedly.

“Dylan,” said Monk calmly, “you have asked both Fred and I that question a number of times, and so far our answers haven’t changed.”

“Sorry, I’m just really excited. Did you know that The Flame’s car is one-“

“One of the fastest around thanks to his brother, who acts as his one-man pit crew,” Fred finished for him.

“Uh…yeah,” said Dylan flatly. He decided to stop talking about the race, and to continue reading the information he had printed out on the races instead.

Fred, meanwhile, went back to thinking about the last week’s events.

****

After disappearing from the outcrop and reappearing near the edge of the cliff – his hands, feet and eyes ceasing glowing as he did – Fred had waited with Monk until Dylan had regained consciousness, then travelled with them to a place Monk called ‘The Training Ground’. Monk had showed them round, led them to their own rooms and told them that they could come here at any time, but needed to mainly sleep at home.

Once they had settled in and Dylan had gone to his room to rest – for he was still quite weak, Fred had asked Monk what on earth had happened to him when he had glowed white. “Well, you see, emotions play a very important part in controlling powers, for both Guardians and Demons. For instance, when Dylan tried to defend you and I, the shot of water he splashed into Troy’s face was very weak because he lacked confidence thanks to his brother’s words. And that shot of water angered Troy, making his attack more powerful, which he used to knock Dylan unconscious.

“That reminds me,” interjected Fred, “you never told me what I’m the Guardian of; Troy interrupted us before you could.”

“You, Fred, are the Guardian of Friendship.”

“Friendship? That doesn’t even sound like a power.”

“Oh, it is. And it’s a special one; there isn’t a Demon of Friendship. Yours is one of the special powers that can not be evil.”

“But how is it a power?”

“Don’t you remember Fred? You told me that right before you started to glow, Troy had been saying all those nasty things about Dylan, which made you really angry, correct?”

“Yeah…”

“Well, that’s my point. Your anger at this horrible person in front of you, that was being so cruel to your new friend made your power temporarily immense.”

“Does that mean that I can only use my power when someone does something bad to a friend of mine?”

“No, no, you can still use your powers normally too” Monk assured Fred.

“So, anger makes Guardians and Demons more powerful” said Fred, trying to confirm what he thought he had been told.

“What? No, not anger. I mean, anger will make Demons more powerful, but not Guardians.”

“But you said…”

“The anger you felt was anger for something someone had done to an innocent living being. As a Guardian, your job is to stop that. But be warned, your powers won’t be enhanced like that very often, so you will need to learn to fight normally. Now, you should go home, I’ll make sure Dylan is alright.

“Should I tell his parents that he’s staying over at my house or something?” asked Fred, getting to his feet.

“No…his parents are dead. He’ll probably live here from now on, especially since Troy lives at the house too.”

“Oh, okay…bye.”

“Goodbye Fred. Oh, and come back here tomorrow if you can.”

Fred had come back the next day, and every day since then.

****

“Fred, come on, you need to go home, or your parents will worry.”

“Sorry Monk” said Fred, coming out of his recollection.

As he walked home, he thought about the training he and Dylan had been given from Monk over the past few days, and whether or not he would be able to control his powers well enough next day. Tomorrow was the races, and Fred thought that there was a good chance that Troy would be showing up there, considering the huge number of people there, on top of the fact that people would be racing around tracks in high-speed cars. This was a big opportunity for Troy to cause chaos, and Fred doubted he would miss it.

Untitled Apology

February 9th, 2009 by Timbo94

Today Drifty reminded me that I haven’t been keeping up to date with my “Untitled” story.

I am sorry about this. I have the 4th chapter ready to go, and I can make the two character profiles reasonably quickly, but I haven’t gotten around to posting them. Don’t worry though, as they will be up this week.

After that, there will be no proper schedule. I am now back at school, and in year 9, so my homework is competing with my free time for my attention and unfortunately the homework is winning. This means that after the two character profiles and the 4th chapter, other “Untitled” posts will be posted whenever I have the time.

Also, on Drifty’s advice, I have made a new page which will act as the contents page for my story. Hope you like it.

Oh, and no more “Untitled” from now on. I have had a title for a while but was never really sure about it. The new title of the story is “Guardians & Demons.” If I think of a better title, I will change it.

EDIT: I have made the new page, but it doesn’t seem to be showing on my site…HK, do you think you could look into this for me?